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Fancy Heart Back

Does a poem need to be fancy?

Do get the message across?

Waiting

Air is hot
Water cold
Mind is full
Hands are empty
Liquid running
Heart is frozen
Verge of breaking
Throat is lurching
See your image
fading quickly
Line on strike
Text has muted
Lips have dried
Scent departed
panic eludes
Solid remission
arms are slack
you once filled them
Dabbing back
dampening ledges
wrenching hurt
In every muscle
may be pathetic
at least its honest
It may be wrong
but I still want it

Dragon77Lady 2009

fancy is not a word I would want to apply to poetry...this tells of honest emotions...for me, it works very well, particularly the last two lines

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